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gave me flashbacks to the Japanese Ronald McDonald "Ran Ran Ru". But, in a good way.

ZLEAP responds:

haha I'll take that compliment.

Thankya.

muh

once the high ringing starts its good then shit again when the noise bass starts again, i think you need a shorter build up then a wider verity of sounds and more of a build up to the end.

p.s. a nicer bass would be cool too but that's up to you

PizzaBox responds:

WHEN I WAS 7 I CHOKED ON A HOT DOG AND ALMOST DIED

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dude i remember this game i always thought that game had trippy music
a little repetitive but a nice break at 1:20

juec responds:

haha yep repetitive indeed. this song was actually just a little extra i did. i had spare time before my release, so i decided to make this. its actually a really simple song.

wtf

This song has a simple yet extremly yet exacuted that still changes, not meny songs can claim this. It has the highest rating in industeral right now and yet you have no reveiws WTF, just keep up the amazing industerals.

old memories

i love the creepy dark mechanical feel in songs that most people can't pull off but you did it man it brings back favs from the past

thank you
5/5
4.28 / 5.00 (+0.0064)
10/10

PuffballsUnited responds:

Thanks! I feel accomplished! :D

Cool

Aside from not being able to hear the voice its a sick beat
that im putting on my i-pod.

too loud

as much as i love your music i think your voice is a little too loud for the music
and the chorus is a repetitive but it matchs the song so i guess it works keep up the good work! :D

Oh and if you have time look at my music im still new so im trying discover a style i would love it if you could guild me in the right direction or just comment on my mistakes : ]

Lone-X responds:

Yeah, I have to re-edit it to fix my voice. I don't know why I didn't notice that my voice was way higher than the music. Thanks!

"love"

your music is why i love industrial and promise me you won't add vocal but if you do the voice and lyrics must match the song but i cant thick of anything to match this it too good.

well done

You have in deed made a song that can take you away to somewhere peaceful, pretty and calming.
Im downloading this song to help me get through my day, thank you

cool shit man : ]

it's really cool and it match your dream but the voice syth could use work i say something other then the FL voice mybe go over your own voice with a filter.

Lone-X responds:

Thats good advice. A real voice would sound smoother and nice. I think when its time to redo this song, I'll add real vocals. Thanks man.

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