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gave me flashbacks to the Japanese Ronald McDonald "Ran Ran Ru". But, in a good way.

ZLEAP responds:

haha I'll take that compliment.

Thankya.

muh

once the high ringing starts its good then shit again when the noise bass starts again, i think you need a shorter build up then a wider verity of sounds and more of a build up to the end.

p.s. a nicer bass would be cool too but that's up to you

PizzaBox responds:

WHEN I WAS 7 I CHOKED ON A HOT DOG AND ALMOST DIED

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dude i remember this game i always thought that game had trippy music
a little repetitive but a nice break at 1:20

juec responds:

haha yep repetitive indeed. this song was actually just a little extra i did. i had spare time before my release, so i decided to make this. its actually a really simple song.

old memories

i love the creepy dark mechanical feel in songs that most people can't pull off but you did it man it brings back favs from the past

thank you
5/5
4.28 / 5.00 (+0.0064)
10/10

PuffballsUnited responds:

Thanks! I feel accomplished! :D

too loud

as much as i love your music i think your voice is a little too loud for the music
and the chorus is a repetitive but it matchs the song so i guess it works keep up the good work! :D

Oh and if you have time look at my music im still new so im trying discover a style i would love it if you could guild me in the right direction or just comment on my mistakes : ]

Lone-X responds:

Yeah, I have to re-edit it to fix my voice. I don't know why I didn't notice that my voice was way higher than the music. Thanks!

cool shit man : ]

it's really cool and it match your dream but the voice syth could use work i say something other then the FL voice mybe go over your own voice with a filter.

Lone-X responds:

Thats good advice. A real voice would sound smoother and nice. I think when its time to redo this song, I'll add real vocals. Thanks man.

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